Sharing:  Here are some of our first sentences using RECIPE FOR WRITING WITH ETHERPAD writing buddies.  We are going to add a sound sentence and then have a character or two appear!  We will edit, add, subtract, and proof read when we have completed the whole recipe which is published below.

1  The blazing sun shone over the planets as the black hole darkened the sky.

2  As the sun rises across the sea I can see the islands in the distance. 

3  As the sun rose above the horizon across the deserted plain the vultures began to swoop down and attempt to devour the sheep below.

4 Among the clouds lays the island of Azzreal, an almost barren island except for large mountains that sit on the edge of the island's surface and a long winding river that flows through Azzreal's one city, the city of Assara. Surrounding Assara are large walls engraved with the names of Assara's previous rulers. Surrounding the cities centre are rows of grand 

buildings and overwatching the city upon one of the highest hills in Azzreal stands the king's palace.

5  The rain hits the soft green hills and the drops of water roll down the hill into the rising stream. 

6   On the beach waves are crashing and the sun is slowly settling down into the sea. 

7  Out on the farm the lambs are running around, the sheep are munching the last of the brown stubble and the morning is clear and bright.

8    As the glowing sun disappeared behind the lushest green hills in the outback hill country, the far cry of a new lamb filled the crisp, clean air. 

Freddie & Brodie   As the sun set, the moon rose from behind the hills and the wolves howled loudly.

Rohan & George L   Up on the hill, a rusty old lighthouse looked down as rolling waves came crashing in and hit the rocks of the rugged coastline.  Sleek seals jumped across the rocks and the surfers...

Ethan & Sam  As the sun rose above the grey clouds one big white cloud came rolling in.

George S & Rebecca  The sky darkened and all that could be seen were the outlines of the ghostly trees covering the hills.  And all that could be heard were the loud howls of the midnight wolves.

Lucy, Janine & Charlotte   As the morning sun rises, melting the morning frost, the lambs feel the new spring in the air.

Morna & Tineisha  I watch the sun set behind the tall wispy trees and wonder where the sun is heading?

Maia &   Shardae  The sun was just setting on the horizon  as I stared down at the poppies, with glistening tears sliding down my face.