8 March 2016
Goal: to write a recount using complex sentences and past tense.
From ‘I Am David’ by Anne Holm
David decided to leave that night because he heard the mother and father say things about himself.
David grabbed his bundle and wrote a letter to the family, saying thank you for everything they gave him, such as a bed, food, water, comfort, and a bath.
When he was just about to leave, Maria walked into the room and said she had a nightmare about David and the fire incident. David told her he had to leave and he did that night.
David arrived in Florence and went into the church where he met the priest. David explained about his god and the priest said that his god is the same god but David disagreed. The priest offered for David to go and have something to eat, and David accepted and away they went.
By Credance.
Hi Credance
ReplyDeleteThis is an interesting recount, with all the key ideas in the right order. I also see there is a complex sentence in there! Well done!
What do you think is going to happen to David next, now that winter is coming on?
Mrs Dalley